Wikipedia:Peer review/Laal language/archive1

Laal language
I think I've more or less completed this article. Please have a look; I'm not sure whether I've put everything in sufficient context. - Mustafaa 03:20, 30 Aug 2004 (UTC)
 * Well it needs comparison to the other languages it is geographically and/or linguistically close to. What makes it different?  Also the intro has way too many red links.  If you know what those things are, try to create at least the Perfect stub article - Taxman 17:12, Aug 31, 2004 (UTC)