Wikipedia:Peer review/Lane Murdock/archive1

Lane Murdock
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like thoughts on the article's tone - ensuring it is neutral. I'd also like reviews on the last two sections: 'Responses' and 'Continuing Advocacy'. Any sections that you think I could add more to? Also, have the images been correctly cited?

Thanks, Verseaille (talk) 09:55, 18 October 2018 (UTC)