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Laptop

 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for May 2008.
 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for May 2008.

This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I think it needs general review.

Thanks, Kozuch (talk) 12:05, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Comments from «  Milk's Favorite Cøøkie  (  talk  /  contribs )
 * Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -  between a number and the unit of measurement.
 * Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text.
 * Per Wikipedia:Context and Build the web, years with full dates should be linked.
 * Per Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article.
 * The two tags as soon as you see the article tell alot. It needs citations.
 * This section needs a cleanup.
 * This section needs an update.
 * This section has no citation whatsoever.
 * Expand the "Advantages" section. I'm sure there is more to it then that.
 * That's all for now. «  Milk's Favorite Cøøkie  (  talk  /  contribs ) 19:38, 17 May 2008 (UTC)