Wikipedia:Peer review/Latin profanity/archive1

Latin profanity
Any expansions would be welcome. I've tried to deal with each major topic under a series of similar headers. A couple of specific improvements I'd like to see would be: 1./ to improve (and make any needed corrections) in the translated poetry; and 2./ if speakers of some of the other or smaller Romance languages could chime in with any reflexes that exist in them, especially among the words that AFAIK vanished without trace. Smerdis of Tlön 17:39, 28 March 2006 (UTC)
 * Quite enjoyable to read...as I am a latin student, I look forward to using them in class. However, the article isn't too well organized, especially in the long description of each individual word...bit confusingOsbus 00:04, 30 March 2006 (UTC)


 * Some notes about the article:
 * Please do not use personal pronouns in the article (as far as I can tell the only instance is the use of the word "our" in the lead)
 * Convert the list in the lead into prose.
 * The "Profane Latin words" section is redundant since that is a simple rephrasing of the title of the article. Convert the rest of the sections from === === to == ==.

Thanks, AndyZ t 00:46, 30 March 2006 (UTC)