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Laundromat (song)
I've listed this article for a peer review because I'd like to put it through the WP:FAC process in the future. I first worked on this article back in 2016, where I received a very helpful GAN review. However, I have rewritten it to include additional sources and hopefully improve the prose. I have already put in a request for a copy-edit from the WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors, but I wanted to also put this through the peer review process to hopefully strength the article as much as possible before a FAC. I would greatly appreciate any comments. Thank you in advance! Aoba47 (talk) 02:01, 18 October 2021 (UTC)