Wikipedia:Peer review/Law school of Berytus/archive1

Law school of Berytus
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because… I need opinions on ways to improve the article in order for it to achieve GA status (or A-Class), I particularly need assistance with the lead and im not very satisfied with my english writing skills.

please advise.

Thanks a lot, Eli  +  16:03, 24 March 2013 (UTC)