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Lawrence Kohlberg
Lawrence Kohlberg is the father of moral development and an incredible person. I want his article to be froth with interestingness. if that _is_ a word. ;) JoeSmack (talk) 23:04, July 12, 2005 (UTC)
 * Would it be too simple? -- Jerry Crimson Mann 04:39, 13 July 2005 (UTC)
 * Well, I mean the length of this article is a bit short. More elaboration is hihgly desirable. :-) -- Jerry Crimson Mann 06:09, 13 July 2005 (UTC)
 * Oh i totally agree. I've been staring at this article for hours on end, and i need some others to throw some new paint on there. I'd love it if people could expand it a little. Keep in mind there are already articles for things like his stages of moral development and just community schools.JoeSmack (talk) 06:26, July 13, 2005 (UTC)


 * An explanation of his 'stage theory' would greatly add to the article (the actual article on the theory is too succinct in itself). Also, what about his critics (e.g., Kohlberg has been criticized from thinking from a 'boy-centered' point of view). And his influence? -- Cugel 08:02, July 13, 2005 (UTC)
 * I actually specifically took out both those things. stage theory has it's own article, and critisism follows work, and, i suppose, should to that article mostly. a little could be put into his bio article, but keep in mind it isn't Carol Gilligan's article, it's Kohlberg's. anyways, i always felt stage theory was WAY WAY too big to make a 'short blurb' about too.JoeSmack (talk) 13:13, July 13, 2005 (UTC)
 * And I realize Kohlberg's stages of moral development right now is too succinct right now. In fact parts are flat out wrong (especially around level 7 stuff), and that is the next big project for me and a friend I am cajoling into re-writing the article.JoeSmack (talk) 13:13, July 13, 2005 (UTC)