Wikipedia:Peer review/Leeds Town Hall/archive1

Leeds Town Hall
I've listed this article for peer review because I intend to raise it to the quality of a Featured Article. It has had one turn at FAC this February-April (see here), but this was archived due to issues arising. These can be summarised as over-embellished language lingering within the prose, image licensing, and a lot of general copyediting. I have given it more work and now seek the feedback for improvements which will enable the article to return to FAC.

Thanks,  Rcsprinter123 (chat)  22:59, 8 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Comment – One thing that sticks out like a sore thumb is the odd use of metric first for a couple of items in the lead following imperial first, which the article mainly uses. Keith D (talk) 12:34, 9 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Gosh, I don't know how I never noticed that. Amended to imperial first for all conversions. Thanks, Keith D!  Rcsprinter123 (post)  16:48, 9 June 2020 (UTC)