Wikipedia:Peer review/Let Me Hold You/archive1

Let Me Hold You
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I've been putting a lot of work on it for about five days now and I see potential in it to be a GA. The Background and Composition sections seem to trip me up as far as getting this to GA-status. I've been a part of expanding hip-hop articles to GA-status for quite some time now and I like to see this be another addition to it. I await your opinions on what should be done to this article.

Thanks, DepressedPer (talk) 07:46, 28 August 28, 2014 (UTC)