Wikipedia:Peer review/Li Shanchang/archive1

Li Shanchang
I've listed this article for peer review because…

Article is finished for the time being. Give it a score.

Thanks, FourLights (talk) 20:01, 10 October 2017 (UTC)

Comments From Eddie891

 * I'd try and avoid quoting things that can merely be rephrased such as "bored with Li's arrogance" and "planned the organization of the six ministries, shared in the drafting of a new law code, and supervised the compilations of the History of Yuan, the Ancestral Instructions and the Ritual Compendium of the Ming Dynasty."
 * I'd avoid things like "the History of Mingbiography" because it is evident in the source.

more to come. Eddie891 Talk Work 16:18, 21 October 2017 (UTC)