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Liberty Bell
This is an important article and could use peer review. Thanks! --South Philly 04:13, 20 July 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 15:26, 21 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Not a bad article but it needs references. The section on "The Crack" should be incorporated into "19th Century history, repair". The writing could also be improved in parts. To do this try to see if you can make the same statement using less words. For example, the "according to eyewitness testimony" phrase could be removed from the article. Also try specifying who the many are in the statement "proved unpopular with many". Are they vistors, tourists or commentators? Cedars 05:32, 21 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Thanks!--evrik 19:22, 25 July 2006 (UTC)