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Like I Love You

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 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for May 2009.

This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I have expanded the article with more references. I would like comments on improvement to get the article to Good Article standard.

Thanks, 03  md  15:59, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

Ruhrfisch comments: Interesting article, but I think it needs more work and expansion before it is ready for GA. Here are some suggestions for improvement. Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch &gt;&lt;&gt; &deg; &deg; 04:15, 5 June 2009 (UTC)
 * The lead should be an accessible and inviting overview of the whole article. Nothing important should be in the lead only - since it is a summary, it should all be repeated in the body of the article itself but there is a fair amount in the lead that is not repeated in the article. Please see WP:LEAD
 * The Background and writing section makes no mention of actually writing the song. There are 5 authors listed in the infobox - what role did they all play?
 * There is nothing on the recording of the song either - also nothing on making the video (presumably where Kevin Federline dances)
 * Remixes/official versions has no refs - my rule of thumb is that every quote, every statistic, every extraordinary claim and every paragraph needs a ref.
 * The article seems to use too much of its material direct quotations - this should be paraphrased (keep the info) and the best phrases / sentences kept as quotes. See WP:NFCC
 * Please see WikiProject_Songs for official WIkiProject Songs suggestions
 * I think a model article is also helpful for ideas to follow and examples - there are manys FAs on songs, see Category:FA-Class song articles and even more GAs, see Category:GA-Class song articles