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Like a Prayer (song)
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I have developed this article from scratch, on one of the most revered and widely accepted songs of all time. I want reviewers to give their opinion on the overall structure, the alignments and of course, the bad boy, prose of the article. Be as brutal as you want with it, I want to eventually make it a Featured Article.

Another thing, no offense, but I don't want anybody from the music section articles of Wikipedia to come and review it. I want a completely different opinion.

Thanks, — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 15:44, 4 July 2011 (UTC)

Will look at it. I have never really read or written any of our pop (or other) music stuff at Wiki. Also, I don't mean to be "brutal". But I pretty much try to really get into stuff and give a lot of feedback. Think you will be getting a good outside (even outside Wiki) perspective. TCO (reviews needed) 18:39, 10 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Will be much appreciated TCO. Thanks a lot for taking the time to look at it. — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 04:55, 11 July 2011 (UTC)


 * Nice work, Legolas. My thoughts on talk page.  Main advice is to cut it a bit (will read better), especially in lead.  I did not do a detailed prose edit (it is pretty decent and I like your writing style), but I did point out a few errors and it will still need that.  Thanks for an interesting contribution!TCO (reviews needed)  21:51, 12 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Thak you TCO for the wonderful comments. I will surely take them into consideration and make changes accordingly. — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 15:55, 13 July 2011 (UTC)