Wikipedia:Peer review/Lisa Blue Baron/archive1

Lisa Blue Baron
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to know what information would improve the article.

Thanks, Seporche (talk) 18:45, 1 August 2017 (UTC)

Comments from Eddie891
Blue and her co-counsel sued. In June, a magistrate awarded them more than $34 million. Hill is appealing." seems bigger than the 55 million case mentioned.
 * At a cursory glance, the article looks to lack major issues. However, the article does not go into a lot of detail on things such as her $33.5 million house.
 * "n 2012, she was elected Vice-President of the American Association for Justice and began her leadership of the organization in 2014 when she moved to Washington D.C" You can probably go into a LOT more detail on this.
 * I would try to remain consistent (at least in a section) with referring to her as "Blue" or "Baron"
 * I found this in an article, seems worth a mention "A decade ago, the National Law Journal named her a top female lawyer"
 * Her being dyslexic seems worth a mention
 * Seems she was also a prolific contributor to the Clintons in the 1990s as well.
 * You might talk a bit about philanthropy
 * "In May 2010, a court ruled the Hills should receive almost $115 million. About 30 percent of that was to go to three attorneys. But Hill refused to pay, calling the fee “unconscionable,” according to court documents.
 * overall, I would probably just expand the article with available information. Look at other lawyers for ideas. Eddie891 Talk Work 11:22, 14 October 2017 (UTC)