Wikipedia:Peer review/List of 30 Rock awards and nominations/archive1

List of 30 Rock awards and nominations


This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I have been working on this article for the past few days and I would like to see if there is any further improvements I could make.

I have tried to style the article similarly to the featured list, List of awards won by The Simpsons.

I would appreciate feedback on the opening paragraph and what could be added to it to improve it.

Thanks, Jamie jca (talk) 00:08, 19 February 2008 (UTC)

Masem
Otherwise looks like a good reasonable approach set by the other article. --M ASEM 14:40, 20 February 2008 (UTC)
 * I would see if you can do something like the Simpsons one where each major award category has a block of text prior to it to explain the show's history (eg summarize the table below for key points).
 * Note that "Emmy" should be capitalized.
 * I would try to play with HTML br tags and nowrap as to make sure that the full award name in the tables doesn't split across lines, while allowing for the recipients to wrap.


 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style. If you would find such a review helpful, please click here. Thanks, APR t 02:15, 21 February 2008 (UTC)