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List of Ah My Goddess episodes (season 1)

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This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to move this to FL. However, I'm not entirely sure what an FL would include, so I'd like to run this article/list through here first.

Thanks, D ARTH P ANDA duel 02:01, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Ruhrfisch comments: Interesting article on a series I have never heard of. Very briefly, here are some suggestions for improvement. Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch &gt;&lt;&gt; &deg; &deg; 04:15, 3 January 2009 (UTC)
 * There are many episode list FLs, some on anime series - I would look at some of those for ideas and examples to follow. One possible model FL is List of YuYu Hakusho episodes (season 1).
 * I would make clearer the connection between the manga and the episodes - are they new material or an adaptation of the books?
 * I would also explain the extra two episodes on the DVDs - were they ever broadcast? How did the events in them affect the second season? Why were they made?
 * There are several abbreviations that need to be explained on first use, for example ... animated by AIC, and produced by TBS.[1] I note that TBS is explained in the next sentence, but it needs to be explained in the first place it is used.
 * The episode summaries call Belldandy a "goddess" but the lead calles her an "angel" - which is it?
 * What are TV-sized versions of the theme music?
 * Language is unclear in several places - for example The season was released to Japan between April and December of 2005.[3] seems to be about the Japanese DVD release, but is not clear.

N OCTURNE N OIR talk 04:49, 3 January 2009 (UTC)