Wikipedia:Peer review/List of Docklands Light Railway stations/archive1

List of Docklands Light Railway stations
I've listed this article for peer review because… whilst it has been a few years I think this is mainly complete but I think it needs a bit of looking over. What should I trim from the history and what else should I include? Anything else?

Thanks, Simply south ...... time, deparment skies for just 9 years 15:06, 30 July 2015 (UTC)

Comments from RO

 * Lead
 * The network has been extended and the capacity of its trains expanded so that now nearly 70 million journeys made every year.[1]
 * "journeys are made every year"?


 * History
 * For over 200 years London's docks and wharves thrived on imperial commerce.
 * It's better to say "more than", than "over".


 * particularly tobacco, timber and skins
 * Does "skins" refer to animal hides?


 * and warehouses could be used by private enterprise
 * Were these sold at that time?


 * but put on hold by Norman Fowler in 1979
 * Readers might find it helpful to know who Fowler was.


 * Opening and extensions
 * Sites for stations at Carmen Street (later Langdon Park) and Pudding Mill Lane were safeguarded
 * What is meant by "safeguarded"?

Seems pretty thorough and well-written. I'm not sure the prose is all that engaging, but maybe its difficult to achieve that with material that tends to be a bit dry. Be sure parts aren't overly detailed, which might be contributing to reader fatigue. Its a nice piece overall that I'm sure represents the topic well. Nicely done. Keep up the great work! RO (talk) 17:12, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Conclusion