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List of Dragonlance deities
I've worked on this article due to a cleanup tag being placed on it and think it's come a long way. I like it but second opinions are nice. Any information, small or big, is fine and definitely appreciated. All comments are helpful to me. Also, I was wondering whether to title this as is or as "Deities of Dragonlance" which currently redirects to this page. Thoughts on that are welcome. Thanks.  Dooms Day349  19:58, 18 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Some comments, hopefully useful:
 * Your average (non-D&D-knowledgeable) reader is likely to be puzzled by the statement that: "the gods themselves do not have d20 mechanics" Wha...?
 * A frequent issue I see here is that parts of this page require some pre-existing knowledge on the part the reader about the setting. The use of such terms as Graygem, "Chaos War", "All-Saints War", "War of Souls", "Dragonlance campaign" and "white moon" should include some type of context or explanation.
 * Citations should follow punctuation.
 * Most of the citations reference a single work. Could you not have a reference section for the full work and a notes section to list just the chapters or page numbers of those works?
 * The page is in need of illustrations.
 * Thanks. &mdash; RJH (talk) 20:54, 31 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Thanks for your comments! I'll work on the d20 mechanics statement, and also on the pre-existing knowledge issue.  I'll also fix the citations, and your idea is really good actually, think I may go with that.  Illustrations could be a bit harder but I have some ideas.  Thank you very much for the comments!   Dooms  Day349  22:20, 31 May 2007 (UTC)
 * You are most welcome. Thank you for the prompt reply. &mdash; RJH (talk) 16:31, 1 June 2007 (UTC)