Wikipedia:Peer review/List of India Twenty20 International cricketers/archive1

List of India Twenty20 International cricketers
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because this list, a failed FLC wasn't updated in the last 4 years. I have expanded this list with statistics upto date. I want everyone's feedback on how to make this an FL.

Thanks, &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 12:32, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

Comments –
 * We have a helpful example of a similar FL at List of England Twenty20 International cricketers. One thing I notice right off the bat is that the first paragraph is more well-developed in the England list. Modelling the first paragraph here after the one there would be wise.
 * I have rearranged the sentences now. Does it look okay? &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 12:29, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes, that looks much better. Giants2008  ( Talk ) 02:21, 5 January 2012 (UTC)


 * "having played 31 T20I matches for 16 wins and a tie against Pakistan." "for" → "with"?
 * Done &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)


 * "In 2007, they became won the world championship...". Remove "became".
 * Done &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Is the fourth-highest total in an innings sourced by anything?
 * Done &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)


 * In the photo caption, the "till date" doesn't help the writing and would be better off removed.
 * Done &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Could cite captains and wicketkeepers in the key, like the England list does.
 * Done &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Players: "This list comprising of list of Indian cricketers...". Needs "comprising of list" taken out.
 * Done &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)


 * In the footnote, "international" should probably be capitalized.
 * Done &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)


 * The hyphen in the title of reference 2 should probably be an en dash. Such minor formatting improvements are permitted for ref titles.
 * Done &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)

( Talk ) 22:40, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
 * What makes http://www.itsonlycricket.com/entry/1888/ a reliable source? Giants2008
 * Replaced that with a RS. &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 14:29, 3 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Comments:
 * As Giants2008 suggested, improve the lead.
 * Rephrase "they became won".
 * Done &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Table does not meet WP:ACCESS requirements; use scope row, column and header, etc (if I'm not missing anything else).
 * Done &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 12:18, 3 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Categorize the column headings into batting, bowling and fielding.
 * Done &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 10:34, 3 January 2012 (UTC)


 * You didn't use ♠ anywhere.
 * Done &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Fix this large white space in the "Players" section, above the table. I guess you need to adjust the width of the table, or don't use it at all.
 * Did you mean removing the image? &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
 * No, I was taking about  parameter. Actually you should use more good quality images.  undefined — Bill william compton  Talk   03:49, 5 January 2012 (UTC)


 * West Indies → West Indies in the footnotes.
 * Done &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 10:14, 3 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Instead of using slashes use dashes in the titles of the references.
 * Done &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 10:43, 3 January 2012 (UTC)

undefined — Bill william compton Talk   03:10, 3 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Comments
 * The Australian team is overlinked in the lead.
 * Removed &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 16:59, 3 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Tie v Pakistan isn't in ref 4.
 * Done &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 16:59, 3 January 2012 (UTC)


 * You expand MS of MS Dhoni, but not RP of RP Singh.
 * Done &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 16:59, 3 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Check sorting. E.g. HS, you have a 0 sorting before a bunch of en-dashes...
 * Done &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 04:49, 6 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Suggest you force the en-dashes to sort before 0's in all columns.
 * Didn't get you. Can you make a dummy edit to illustrate tha if possible. &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 09:47, 4 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Done. &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 04:49, 6 January 2012 (UTC)


 * "first Twenty20 cap." not sure why "first Twenty20" is part of the link to the cap.
 * Done &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 16:59, 3 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Virendar Sehwag ->Virender Sehwag.
 * Done &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 16:59, 3 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Cricinfo linked in ref 1 and ref 4 only. Why not the lot or just the first?
 * Done &mdash; Commander (Ping me) 16:59, 3 January 2012 (UTC)

The Rambling Man (talk) 13:53, 3 January 2012 (UTC)