Wikipedia:Peer review/List of Indian violinists/archive1

List of Indian violinists
This peer review discussion has been closed. If you look at the history of this page, you'll see that I've changed it significantly. I have referenced all names, all pictures are from Wikipedia themselves and I've put them all into a table. I want to get this list to very good standard. Kindly let me know the necessary changes/mods that maybe needed to get this list to the highest rating possible.

Thanks, D437 (talk) 07:32, 18 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Comments from Stfg
 * I've copy edited the lede for better grammar and flow.
 * The sentence "Indian violinists have performed concerts all over the world and have achieved a lot of fame and success over the years" is puffery and isn't verified by the source given. Suggest removing it as it doesn't give any real information.
 * The references need filling out to provide more details. Just a URL and a title are insufficient. I suggest using the cite templates.
 * I haven't checked all of the references, but the following are unacceptable:
 * FN6 (B. Sasikumar Profile): appears to be his own web page, and McAfee SiteAdviser warns of "risky behaviors"
 * FN9 ("Dwaram Venkataswamy Naidu") Wikipedia page, not allowed as a reference per WP:CIRCULAR
 * The following, being the subjects' own web sites (if they are really notable, you should be able to find suitable references in the articles about them):
 * FN7 (Balabhaskar Profile - Official Website)
 * FN10 (Embar Kannan - About)
 * FN24 (Lalgudi Vijayalakshmi - Profile)
 * FN31 (N. Sivanandan - Profile)
 * FN33 (Official Website of Sangeeta Shankar)
 * FN38 (V.V. Ravi - Profile)
 * FN39 (Vittal Ramamurthy's Official Page)
 * Hope this helps. --Stfg (talk) 16:24, 18 December 2014 (UTC)