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List of Manchester United F.C. players (fewer than 25 appearances)
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because it is the third Manchester United players list I have nominated. I feel it should almost be ready for FL - any guidance is appreciated. I also need help finding a free image of Peter Beardsley to compliment the page.

Thanks, 03  md  02:01, 26 November 2010 (UTC)


 * These articles should be self-contained so that someone who isn't a fan of the sport (like me) can understand them. In that vein, can you explain somewhere what happened to Manchester when the Permier League was formed. Or at least how that affected the franchise, and its players. Its also redundant to have a section titled "List of players" when the whole article is supposed to be a list of players. I would almost rather not even have a section title. Maybe just have a lead, then maybe be a link to edit the list. Oh well, since that breaks about ten years of precedents, how about just titling the section "Players". I have to admit when I chuckled at first when I read that section title, and said to myself, "Really? You mean an article titled List of Manchester playeers" contains a "list of players"? AaronY (talk) 23:48, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
 * I've added a few lines on the Premier League and changed the section title. 03  md  05:47, 17 December 2010 (UTC)