Wikipedia:Peer review/List of Nunavut general elections/archive1

List of Nunavut general elections
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because due to a change in the featured topic criteria, the Canadian election timelines featured topic has 3 months to satisfy criterion 3.c. by getting a peer review done for this article. Thanks, Tom pw (talk) (review) 10:32, 12 October 2008 (UTC)


 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for October 2008.
 * In order...
 * Lead length: this has been reworked, but can't really be made any longer without woffle
 * Link density: All links are definately useful and needed... this will be always be a link-heavy article.
 * Lack of images: Two added.
 * No image top right: Done
 * Lack of infobox: None suitable
 * Article length: Can't really expand - this is a list primarily.
 * Reference formatting: done
 * Copyediting: Done.
 * Tom pw (talk) (review) 20:55, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

Ruhrfisch comments: Very briefly, here are some suggestions for improvement. If you want more comments, please ask here. Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch &gt;&lt;&gt; &deg; &deg; 03:51, 19 October 2008 (UTC)
 * The 2008 election column is confusing as now shown - since the first entry is "Cancelled" I thought the whole election was cancelled
 * Spell out abbreviations before first use, so MLA in On 20 August 2008, Evyagotailak stepped down as the MLA.
 * Internet refs need URL, title, author if known, publisher and date accessed. cite web and other cite templates may be helpful. See WP:CITE and WP:V
 * I think The election in the Akulliq riding was cancelled 7 October 2008 due to an appeal by Jack Anawak over his residency disqualification.[12] needs more explanation.
 * There is a one sentence paragraph in the Lead - could this be expanded or combined with the preceding paragraph?


 * In order:
 * 2008 column: dealt with by filling it in properly, now the 2008 election has been held :-)
 * MLA spelt out.
 * cite web applied as much as needed (I think I've 'got em all)
 * Lead issues: Reworked things somewhat.
 * Thanks for your suggestions, all of which have been most useful. In a way, this wasn't the best time for a peer reveiw due to the rcent election. Anyway, I've included all your suggestions. Tom pw (talk) (review) 20:55, 28 October 2008 (UTC)