Wikipedia:Peer review/List of Persona 4 characters/archive1

List of Persona 4 characters
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because it has been tagged due to lack of references and in-universe style for a few years. I'm not sure whether the tags could be removed, but I was looking for more opinions regarding the prose's style and amounts of jargon. The length from the protagonist's section is considerably longer. Also, some characters listed here have almost no importance to the game's plot and I wondered whether they are suitable for Wikipedia.

Thanks, Tintor2 (talk) 18:56, 25 August 2012 (UTC)

The article looks good. However, some characters who have no importance on the list should be removed. We also need to use an out-of-universe style as well. We may need some game quote references as well. The length of the protagonist section needs to be trimmed down. Thanks, Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 22:53, 25 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Thanks. I still have to see what to remove from the Protagonist's section (probably the whole explanation about the Arcanas, it's full of nihongo). I was going to cite some parts from the other characters section but I decided to wait until seeing what characters are not worth mentioning. Maybe a user with more knowledge regarding the game could give an opinion regarding which.Tintor2 (talk) 01:22, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

I just want to add that you can cut down on the size of the article if you group the quotes together. I did something like that in List of Tales of Symphonia characters but the disadvantage would be is that you can't reuse the refs, as far as I know. DragonZero ( Talk  ·  Contribs ) 14:13, 26 August 2012 (UTC)


 * I see. Maybe joining references from the artbook would reduce it a bit.Tintor2 (talk) 17:59, 26 August 2012 (UTC)


 * I did a test in User talk:Tintor2/ draft removing two shop characters and the arcanas information. About 10 kylobites were lost leaving a draft with 111 kylobites. Still, once the PlayStation Vita will be released some more references would need to be added, so apparently there is more undue weight.Tintor2 (talk) 21:44, 26 August 2012 (UTC)