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List of Sailor Moon episodes

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 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for October 2008.

This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to get it to Featured List status.

Thanks, The Le ft  orium  19:46, 11 October 2008 (UTC)

Ruhrfisch comments: Very briefly, here are some suggestions for improvement. If you want more comments, please ask here.
 * What is there looks pretty good to me, although I do not normally work on anime articles.
 * In the lead, since the fifth season was never released in North America, should this sentence It was released and dubbed in North America by DiC Entertainment and Cloverway.[1][3] be changed to something like The first four seasons have been released and dubbed in North America by DiC Entertainment and Cloverway.[1][3]?


 * Language clean up ''In 2001, ADV Films released the English dubs of the first two seasons in a [on ?] 20 VHS volumes.[6] The two first seasons were taken to [released on 14 Region 1 DVDs] in 2002 by ADV, released over fourteen Region 1 DVDs .[7]


 * I would refer to the 3rd and 4th seasons by their names in the lead - the lead is a summary of the article and these are important enough to name in the lead


 * Biggest problem I see is that the episode lists have no inline citations - I assume they could have one or two refs in the header of each list (all come from one or two sources)


 * I would explain why the dubbed episodes do not match up with the original episodes in the intro to the first and second seasons, not wait until the third season intro.
 * ✅ Can you read it through to see if it's OK?

Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch &gt;&lt;&gt; &deg; &deg; 03:14, 19 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks for reviewing, I believe I have addressed all the points above. I left a question further up. -- The Le ft orium  11:42, 19 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I read the season intro paragraphs and they are helpful - now it does seem a bit odd that the last two seasons do not have any introcutory text. Could you add a sentence or two before those too? Ruhrfisch &gt;&lt;&gt; &deg; &deg; 02:52, 20 October 2008 (UTC)