Wikipedia:Peer review/List of St. Louis Rams first-round draft picks/archive1

List of St. Louis Rams first-round draft picks
This peer review discussion has been closed. I would like to know what needs to be done in order to make it a featured list. I used List of Green Bay Packers first-round draft picks as a template for this list. Thanks for your input. --Pinkkeith (talk) 14:08, 23 April 2008 (UTC)

That's a start. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:23, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Comments from
 * Avoid links in the bold part of the lead per WP:LEAD.
 * Place (NFL) after "National football league" so when you use the abbreviation, we all know exactly what you're talking about.
 * Opening sentences in the lead read very choppily.
 * Any reason why always is in italics?
 * A key for positions would be useful for people unfamiliar with US football positions.
 * Enshrined? Admitted to would be better.
 * WP:COLOUR would suggest you don't use colour only as a way of identifying a particular trait, so use an asterisk, dagger etc for these as well.
 * Jack Wilson is a dab link. Check all others.
 * Any reason why you have "Early Era" at all?
 * And "Modern Era"? Are these official designations within NFL or are they terms you've used?
 * Check periods in footnotes.