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List of State University of New York units

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 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for April 2009.

This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to work it up to a WP:FL and need feedback on ways it can be improved.

Thanks,  MBisanz  talk 01:28, 6 April 2009 (UTC)

Comments from Nice list overall. I'm an FLC reviewer, so doubtless you'll see me again soon. Because of this, I'll give general comments only: Dabomb87 (talk) 02:41, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Check for unnecessary wordiness and redundancy:
 * "administration is located in Albany, New York," done
 * " Further, SUNY should not be confused" done
 * At FLC, they like to see a summary of the list in addition to the background info (e.g., first / most recently built institution, which has the highest enrollment, etc.)
 * Put em dashes (—) in the empty cells. done
 * It's generally more appealing to center columns that contain figures. done
 * The easter egg links in the "[Year] Founded" column are alright, but you should provide a note explaining where these links go; see List of New Jersey Nets head coaches as an example. done
 * Per WP:LAYOUT, See also comes before References. done
 * Per MOS, only the first word in section headers should be capitalized. done
 * IMO, it's too much detail to put the websites in this list. Those should go in the main articles of the respective institutions. redid references
 * Some of the "Founded" columns don't have references. redid references
 * "New York State Education Department" Link? done