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List of Toronto Raptors head coaches

 * Previous peer review
 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for February 2009.
 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for February 2009.

This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because this article/list is too short to attain FL status and therefore must undergo a peer review for the future featured topic nomination of lists of NBA head coaches. Two general notes: 1) Although I am not the primary contributor, the creator of the article, SRE.K.A.L.24, said that I could nominate it. 2) I am aware that the article has already been peer reviewed; however, it has undergone substantial changes since then, and I want to ensure that it is still of high quality. Thanks, Dabomb87 (talk) 01:30, 7 February 2009 (UTC)


 * Comments
 * The first four references need to have their placements fixed.
 * Check if I did what you were saying. --  SRE.K.A.L. | L.A.K.ERS ]] 03:42, 7 February 2009 (UTC)


 * "The Raptors formerly played their home games at the SkyDome (now known as the Rogers Centre)." – From when to when?
 * The sentence after says ACC was their home since 1999. --  SRE.K.A.L. | L.A.K.ERS ]] 03:42, 7 February 2009 (UTC)


 * "They moved to the Air Canada Centre, where they have played since 1999." – "In 1999, they moved to the Air Canada Centre."
 * Done. --  SRE.K.A.L. | L.A.K.ERS ]] 03:42, 7 February 2009 (UTC)

Gary King ( talk ) 02:52, 7 February 2009 (UTC)


 * Gary King ( talk ) 03:49, 7 February 2009 (UTC)


 * Comment
 * I helped write it and think it is a great list, but I reviewed it again because User:Dabomb87 asked me to. I can't find any faults, though you may want to change the work of the ref from Basketball-Reference to basketball-reference.com to keep the head coach lists.— Chris!  c t 23:12, 11 February 2009 (UTC)
 * I think "Basketball-Reference" is cleaner than giving the web address. Eventually, I will change the other lists. Dabomb87 (talk) 23:14, 11 February 2009 (UTC)
 * That works too— Chris!  c t 23:19, 11 February 2009 (UTC)

Comment: You may wish to attend to the point that four sentences in the first paragraph of the lead begin: "The Raptors...." Some rephrasing is advisable. Brianboulton (talk) 09:07, 12 February 2009 (UTC)