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List of county routes in Rockland County, New York



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This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I want a better idea what can be thrown into it and its sub-articles (1, 2, and 3). Another user, Airtuna08, and I are putting together future FLCs here and could use any improvement ideas you have. We're accepting anything so...

Thanks, Mitch32contribs 22:22, 15 February 2008 (UTC)

Dihydrogen Monoxide
Just a few random comments. As I said, someone with more knowledge about these types of articles may be able to help more. dihydrogen monoxide (H20) 22:58, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
 * The bold stuff in the lead (New York, etc.) could be wlinked where relevant.
 * I'm really not sure how sourcing on these lists normally works
 * "Most of the routes act as primary roads in the less developed areas and also serve to interconnect the various villages and hamlets of the county." - Could do with a source?
 * Most of Route articles redirect back to one of this list's subarticles. Are these links necessary?
 * The tables in the "Statistics" seem to have different colouring to the ones above. Streamlining is good.