Wikipedia:Peer review/List of feuds in the United States/archive1

List of feuds in the United States
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because…I would like to get it to Featured List condition.

Thanks, GenQuest (talk) 22:15, 30 December 2011 (UTC)

Comments by Lemonade51
 * Thank you for your effort. Much work needs to done before putting this forward for WP:FLC, but it's achievable. My main concern giving this a quick scan is that I do believe this may work/develop better as a ordinary article, not a list. Of course I do need second opinion on this. Below are some suggestions:


 * It is highly recommended not to introduce a list with "This is a list..." or "This list of Xs..."; check WP:LEADSENTENCE for more details.
 * No need to bold image captions, check WP:CAPTION for more.
 * There is one DAB (disambig) link, Neutral Ground.
 * MOS:LEAD (Introduction) could be bigger, essentially a summary of the article.
 * In Early-Hasley, remove the extra space between American Civil War and the comma.
 * Sentences such as 'He was having repeated run-ins with Drew Hasley, an older local citizen who had been a staunch Confederacy backer.' need a citation.
 * Ref 19 is not correctly cited. Check WP:REF for more details.
 * Where is the access date for Ref 18?
 * The external link, The American Storyteller 'Radio Journal' is dead. Consider replacing it.


 * There are more concerns (prose for instance) but this was what I picked up after a short scan. — Lemonade51 (talk) 15:54, 5 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Thanks for your time. I'll work on your suggestions. GenQuest (talk) 00:41, 6 January 2012 (UTC)