Wikipedia:Peer review/List of fiction that breaks the fourth wall/archive1

List of fiction that breaks the fourth wall
This article is 149KB long. It is excessive and keeps growing due to its vague subject. It had an AfD and was kept. This article needs input, badly. -- Wikipedical 03:06, 17 July 2006 (UTC)

Hi Wikipedical,

Some suggestions are to explain in greater detail what the fourth wall is in the lead of the page. And to look into some atypical formatting so that list is easier to read. For example you might consider making the titles of the works larger than the description of how the effect was broken, placing the two on separate lines and increasing the paragraph separation between different titles. Are you planning to work on this article yourself?
 * Yes, I am willing to help out this article. I'd like to use this peer review so I can help maintain the article.  --  Wikipedical 21:51, 21 July 2006 (UTC)

Cedars 05:45, 21 July 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 15:35, 21 July 2006 (UTC)