Wikipedia:Peer review/List of food days/archive1

List of food days
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because it has recently been significantly enhanced, and as prep for a possible WP:Featured Lists candidate.

Thanks, -- Eclipsed (talk) (email) 09:17, 29 July 2015 (UTC)

Comments from MPJ
My weakness is grammar, but my strength is lists and tables and formatting etc. so I took the table through the wringer to see what I could come up with

Comments Good luck with this, there is a ton of work getting this to FL from what I can see.  MPJ  -US 22:00, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
 * First thing the FL review will catch on to is the comment this list is incomplete and will probably not be able to get past this.
 * What is the rule for inclusion on the list? I mean everything I read about the "Hummus Day" for example does not indicate it's any kind of "official" day.
 * None of the tables are sortable, I think it would be appropriate to sort on at least some of the columns.
 * For FL each list entry needs to have reliable sources listed.
 * Tables are inconsistent - some have images, some don't, some have notes on origin etc, others do not
 * The tables are inconsistent in their inclusion of the name of the day in the local languages, some do, some don't.
 * With this being basically a "list of lists" I wish all tables were the same width etc. so they look consistent as you scroll down the list.
 * I get that the US list is longer, but why is that the only one broken down by month? Be consistent if it's going to have a hope of being a Featured List.
 * Note: One entry actually states "Hamburger Day was May 28, 2015!" so there are discrepancies in the list.
 * Oh side note - Use the "External link" in the tool box. There are some that need to be addressed, dead and need registration especially. Also I believe the images used all need "alt text" to describe them?  MPJ  -US 22:14, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Good review, thanks! -- Eclipsed (talk) (email) 07:04, 30 July 2015 (UTC)