Wikipedia:Peer review/List of guest stars with The Wiggles/archive1

List of guest stars with The Wiggles

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 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for September 2008.

This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because… I would Like to nominate This as a featured list I Added a Lot of Stuff and Balloonman Thought I should Nominate it Thanks, Jena I LOVE ANTHONY FIELD! (talk) 00:45, 23 September 2008 (UTC)

Ruhrfisch comments: While some work has gone into this, there is absolutley no way this is anywhere near ready for WP:FLC. Here are some suggestions for improvement. If you want more comments, please ask here. Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch &gt;&lt;&gt; &deg; &deg; 01:05, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Please read WP:WIAFL and look at some featured lists for models. This has no images and zero references (the biggest single problem). Without refs it does not meet WP:V, one of the five pillars.
 * The lead does not meeet WP:LEAD, nor does it meet WIAFL on leads: "It has an engaging lead section that introduces the subject, and defines the scope and inclusion criteria of the list."
 * It does not provide context for the reader - some of these are just segments of one song from the TV show (Yummy Yummy) while others are videos / specials (Santa's Rockin'!). See WP:PCR
 * I would ask for help on the talk page of The Wiggles, which is a FA.