Wikipedia:Peer review/List of spells in Harry Potter/archive1

List of spells in Harry Potter
This peer review discussion has been closed. I believe that this article has good content, length, etc. It just needs a few more tweaks. If the rest of Wikipedia feels the same way, then it's on its way to a featured list nomination. --- cymru lass (hit me up)⁄(background check) 01:05, 12 August 2010 (UTC)

Commment Sandman888 (talk) Latest FLC 11:12, 12 August 2010 (UTC)
 * You have a fundamental problem with sources. Referring to a quiz in the BBC is unacceptable. Most of the BBC sources seem to be entertainment for kids. This will have a hard time at the FLC I'm afraid. Also use a proper template, e.g. {cite web} for internet ' references, don't leave bare URLs as " http://www.the-leaky-cauldron.org/docs/jkrtrialday1.txt."
 * Go through each of the sources and see if you think they will pass scrutiny and meet WP:RS.
 * To be honest, the whole list seems a) incomplete or b) original research.

Comment Adabow (talk · contribs) 09:51, 13 August 2010 (UTC)
 * I think a customisation of the table of contents is needed; at the moment it is incredibly large.
 * I agree. How does one go about doing that? cymru lass (hit me up)⁄(background check) 18:29, 14 August 2010 (UTC)