Wikipedia:Peer review/Loham/archive2

Loham
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to make it a good article. Previously nominated for GA but failed due to poor writing quality. So the article need suggestions for improving the grammar, language and writing style.
 * Previous peer review

Thanks, Charles Turing (talk) 07:05, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

Comments from JosephJames

 * Lead
 * It stars Mohanlal, Andrea Jeremiah in the lead roles and Siddique, and Ajmal Ameer in supporting ones.
 * "It stars Mohanlal and Andrea Jeremiah in the lead roles, along with Siddique and Ajmal Ameer in supporting ones."


 * It holds the record for the highest opening day gross for a Malayalam film.
 * "It holds the record for the highest opening day collection for a Malayalam film."


 * Loham received mixed reactions from critic, who praised the lead actor's performance and the film's technical aspects but criticised its screenplay.
 * "Loham received mixed reactions from critics, who praised the performances and technical aspects but criticized its screenplay."


 * the film total gross is ₹13 crore (US$2.0 million).
 * "the film collected around ₹13 crore (US$2.0 million)."

I am doing a peer review for the first time. So forgive me for my mistakes. More suggestions to come soon. Thanks! JosephJames 03:57, 23 October 2015 (UTC)