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Loihi Seamount
'''This peer review discussion has been closed. Feedback came via the talkpage, instead. Now with a GA nom, so I'll close this one.'''
 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for March 2009.

This peer review discussion has been closed. This article is part of a workgroup effort to improve articles related to the Volcanism in Hawaii (still a proposal). Loihi is currently B-Class, and nowhere near a GAC. I have opened a peer review to tackle the issues, and to in general raise it to GA quality. Reviews, please put down specific issues and I will tackle them; or be BOLD and do it yourself!

Thanks, ResMar 19:08, 7 March 2009 (UTC)
 * The biggest problem is obviously COPYVIO issues. Can you please point out specific trouble spots? ResMar 19:12, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Also, do you think that the article covers the topic comepletely, enough for a GA.?


 * Initial comments (coming back later):
 * The article doesn't look terrible, though it could use some thorough copy editing and expansion.
 * I've hit about a dozen resources, do you really think so? What part needs expansion? ResMar
 * Truth to be told I've exausted myself expanding it. See this diff. It made DYK, of course. 

ResMar 22:38, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * ✅ More and more put in. Now 24,576 bytes, up from 21,000. I've basically spent all the non-subscription refs I can find. ResMar 23:33, 13 March 2009 (UTC)


 * First off, when using measurements you need to use the convert template. Ie. 30 miles
 * Except of the "Squared" mesurements (I Keep messing up there for some reason), that's all in order. ResMar


 * Images should not be directly under headers per MOS - you should check that out too.
 * Please clarify- do you mean that I should seperate the images from the headers with a few lines of text? ResMar
 * ✅ Shifted all images into meatspace on right.

I'll be back with specific comments later! Ceran thor 22:07, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Yes please! ResMar 22:19, 8 March 2009 (UTC)

Oh, can you use this table here to tell me what areas still need improvement: check mark N.