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Lorcan Ua Tuathail
Hello everyone. Most of my areas of interest are in relatively obscure eras of Irish history, and, because of uncertain health, I would like as much help and peer review as possible; not just on this article, but them all. Very much looking forward to your comments (mostly!). Fergananim 21:06, 25 August 2005 (UTC)
 * Hello Fergananim. I took a look at the writeup and I found some of the sentences a bit unclear in the way they were written, so I attempted to do a little clarification. Please check and make sure those revisions are meet the intent. The page could use a slightly longer introduction that at least mentions that he was the Archbishop of Dublin for nearly two decades. The very last sentence mentions a "great many" miracles that occured by his intercession, but gives no specifics. Could this either be expanded or referenced? Also the page could do with some references for credibility. Are there any illustrations of this man? Pictures of staues? Paintings? Representations? That sort of thing. Finally, much of the article is concerned with the history of Lorcan, but less so with the man himself. Are there any personal details? Any of his writings? Thanks. &mdash; RJH 17:45, 27 August 2005 (UTC)
 * Hello RJ. Deeply appreciate the help. I agree on the introduction and will do so. As to the miracles I as yet have no specifics but will look them up. As far as I know there are no contempary illustrations of Lorcan, but it would not be hard to find a modern rendering. The trouble is I still don't know how to upload and insert illustrations, which has not helped the quality of my articles. And as to the man himself, point taken. Fergananim 18:27, 27 August 2005 (UTC)
 * Fergananim -- Image uploads are actually fairly easy. The hardest part is figuring out which copyright template to use. I go to the following page for uploads: Special:Upload, and to the following for the list of copyright templates: Image copyright tags. All of this is available under the Help link, along with information on image formatting, and so forth. &mdash; RJH 15:50, 29 August 2005 (UTC)

Extremely good article, but it needs images. Tasks you can do 20:31, 28 August 2005 (UTC)