Wikipedia:Peer review/Lord of the Universe (documentary)/archive1

Lord of the Universe (documentary)
Lord of the Universe (documentary) was recently successfully passed and listed as a Good Article. The documentary film won the Alfred I. du Pont/Columbia University Award in Broadcast Journalism in 1974. The article cites twenty-five sources, and covers topics including content of the documentary, background on production, and reception. I am looking for comments from some fresh readers to the article and previously uninvolved editors, so I can get a new perspective on it and see what else can be done to improve the article's quality further. Thanks for taking the time to give it a read. Cirt 19:38, 1 December 2007 (UTC).

I will address points from the Semi-automated Peer Review, here below. Cirt (talk) 14:28, 6 December 2007 (UTC).
 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style. If you would find such a review helpful, please click here. Thanks, APR t 19:44, 5 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Semi-automated Peer Review
 * 1) Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.[?] - ✅ - There was only one instance of this in the article, in the lead/intro, which I fixed. Cirt (talk) 14:28, 6 December 2007 (UTC).
 * 2) Per Wikipedia:Context and Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006.[?] - ✅ - I checked, it looks like all full-dates within the article itself are linked, but some within citations are not, I will get to linking those full-dates later, but I'd imagine this review point only applies to dates within the main article text. Cirt (talk) 14:29, 6 December 2007 (UTC).
 * 3) *Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?] You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR t 19:43, 5 December 2007 (UTC) -- I will continue to copyedit the article, and may also solicit help from some fresh readers to go through it for minor changes as well. Cirt (talk) 14:30, 6 December 2007 (UTC).