Wikipedia:Peer review/Lost Experience/archive1

Lost Experience
Article is stable now that the Lost Experience is over, needs general feedback. Thanks. -- Wikipedical 18:15, 12 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 20:00, 12 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Lead needs expansion. 'Background' can be easily be merged with 'Premise'. Article is poor in clarity, what were they playing for? how did people know that this was a game? etc. Write it like you were explaining this to someone who doesnt even know what 'Lost' is. Very few footnotes. - Tutmosis  02:05, 13 November 2006 (UTC)