Wikipedia:Peer review/Louis Riel/archive1

Louis Riel
This article is ready for FA status. Please make any changes you deem important so that it can go to this vote. Denni &#9775; 22:08, 2005 Mar 21 (UTC)


 * OK Denni, I will start working on it in ernest now, give me a few days at least. For now, we need to elaborate on the passage in "Early life" that says "...who helped organize the group that supported Guillaume Sayer."  Since Sayer is a red wiki, it is all too mysterious. Cheers, Fawcett5 23:43, 21 Mar 2005 (UTC)

Denni, I noticed that the article is not appearing properly on the main Peer review page, did something get messed up, or was it archived? Could explain why there haven't been any other comments. I could really use some help to flesh out the trial section. I am still working on the North-West Rebellion section, but I'm running out of steam. Fawcett5 20:55, 28 Mar 2005 (UTC)
 * I have put it on the Peer review page. -- JamesTeterenko 02:17, 31 Mar 2005 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me, probably ready for Feature. -- Glen Finney 16:46, 31 Mar 2005 (UTC)
 * Personally, I think we're getting close, but have three major areas left that need improvement:
 * The lead section needs to be expanded to 2-3 paragraphs. Could still use refinement, but is looking better now.
 * The trial section needs to be fleshed out a bit.
 * The legacy section needs to be reworked a bit to make it more stylistically consistent with the rest of the article.
 * hopefully, these will all get addressed within the next week or so, I don't want to rush it back to FAC prematurely. Fawcett5 17:48, 31 Mar 2005 (UTC)