Wikipedia:Peer review/Luigi/archive1

Luigi
I did a copyedit of this article today, so I think I improved it some. Besides references, what should be improved in this article to bring it to good status? &mdash;The Gr e at Llamamoo? 00:44, 27 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 01:33, 27 November 2006 (UTC)
 * I think the "cameos and allusions" should be prosified. The comment about Luigi being a coward should probably include a citation to Luigi's Mansion, not sure if theres a template for video games. There are also a lot of single sentence paragraphs, some compression should allow for a better flow to the article. Jay32183 01:17, 1 December 2006 (UTC)
 * I'd try to find more inline citations also. LuciferMorgan 02:33, 15 December 2006 (UTC)