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M2M (band)
I've listed this article for peer review because i'd eventually like to nominate it for GA, but I am currently the only significant contributor and would like feedback from others.

Thanks, Freikorp (talk) 21:47, 22 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Comments
 * Could you send me a copy of the The Sunday Mail article?
 * Emailed you.


 * I'm not sure calling them a "band" is correct when there are just the two of them.
 * Good point. Would you suggest moving the article to 'M2M (duo)'?


 * "bubblegum" should be "bubble gum"
 * "demo's" should be "demos"
 * Source 6 covers gold status in Australia, but not that it "charted at No. 2 in Norway and No. 4 in both Australia and New Zealand"
 * "Walt Disney Worlds Epcot park" should be "Walt Disney World's Epcot park"
 * "downpayment" should be "down payment"
 * "lucklustre" should be "lacklustre"
 * "songwriting" should be "song writing"
 * The ending was very peaceful, so it was not dramatic at all, but the time before it definitely led up to that. ... we started to pull each other in different directions" Remove the full stop.
 * Suggest swapping the image so they are both facing inwards.
 * Break the break up paragraph after footnote 29
 * So just confirming, you just wanted me to merge the two paragraphs?
 * No, the opposite. Split into smaller paragraphs. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:26, 8 January 2017 (UTC)


 * Could we say a bit more about their solo work?
 * Good idea, ill get to this later.

Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:53, 7 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks for you comments . Have a look at my replies. Freikorp (talk) 00:38, 8 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Hi again . I've now addressed everything. Have a look at the 'Break-up and solo careers' section. I also decided to get a better image of Raven, and ended up cropping an image which you happened to upload :). Also as above do you think the page should be moved to 'M2M (duo)'? Freikorp (talk) 13:16, 8 January 2017 (UTC)