Wikipedia:Peer review/Madison Paige/archive1

Madison Paige
This peer review discussion has been closed. This is a fairly new article, and I'd like to get it in good shape from the start. Tackling this article also moves me closer to improving coverage on Heavy Rain -- one of the more notable games and a rare AAA "interactive movie". The article is moreorless complete, though the "Character overview" section is short and the "In Heavy Rain" section a bit long, but I'm having difficulty figuring whatever I can cut, and could use an outsider's view (always hard to cut anything you wrote).

Thanks, – Bellum (talk) (contribs) 16:35, 21 April 2014 (UTC)