Wikipedia:Peer review/Marcus Trescothick/archive1

Marcus Trescothick
Hoping to get this article going to the standard of Paul Collingwood or KP's article. Organisation of the international and domestic sections to balance content and particularly information on his possible return to the international side. More information needed in the early domestic career section also. Query also some of the information in the personal life section which may possibly be better suited in the international section or early domestic section. All comments and/or suggestions welcome! SGGH speak! 14:55, 13 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Anyone? SGGH speak! 11:21, 24 July 2007 (UTC)

Just one citation needed tag to clear! DrKiernan 10:42, 25 July 2007 (UTC)

If you want comments from the automated reviewer: The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question. You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan 10:42, 25 July 2007 (UTC) DrKiernan 10:42, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.[?]
 * See if possible if there is a free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.[?]
 * Per Wikipedia:Context and Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006.[?]
 * This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, than an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.[?]
 * Avoid using contractions like (outside of quotations): doesn't.
 * Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]
 * Thanks for the ideas, I have gone through the wikilinking and removed the contractions. What do you mean about the free image? The image in the top right corner was taken by me during a match and I released it for any use to the PD as normal, is that not suitable for the top right corner image? SGGH speak! 16:10, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
 * The script doesn't recognise images within infoboxes, it's one of its flaws. Sorry about that. DrKiernan 17:22, 25 July 2007 (UTC)