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Marion, Illinois tornado outbreak
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I have asked for advice at WikiProject Severe weather and WP:METEO. Those who gave me feedback have said that I have done just about as much as I can. I really want to try to improve this article more, but I just do not know how. Thanks, Southern Illinois SKYWARN (talk) 03:35, 4 March 2008 (UTC)
 * If there is more information, it should be added to the article, as it seems a little short. Other than that, the writing seems good. Juliancolton  ( St. Patrick's day ) 17:46, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * I know its short, there is just not that much information out there that is encylopedic. Thanks, Southern Illinois SKYWARN (talk) 18:31, 13 March 2008 (UTC)

Ruhrfisch comments: A map showing the counties affected would help (Illinois, Indiana, Kentucky). This seems to me to be the kind of article that would really be helped by going somewhere (usually a library) with archives of the local newspapers for the communities affected - there are already two newspaper articles cited, but they seem to be 25th anniversary pieces. Also try to include more on the aftermath - was the National Guard called in? Was it a state or national disaster area? Hope this helps, Ruhrfisch &gt;&lt;&gt; &deg; &deg; 00:23, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
 * I would make a map of counties effected, but I have no image editing program, and I don't know where I should ask for this. Also, I'm afraid that I do not have access to Marion's library, I do have access to another Southern Illinois library, but they probably have less information than I already have. Thanks, Southern Illinois SKYWARN (talk) 00:33, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
 * I will see what I can do about a quick map. As horrific as it sounds, I would imagine even TIME, Newsweek and national papers like the NY Times would have coverage from 1982 at your local library. Ruhrfisch &gt;&lt;&gt; &deg; &deg; 00:53, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
 * The tornado or the library? :) Southern Illinois SKYWARN (talk) 00:57, 17 March 2008 (UTC)