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Mark of the Year

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This peer review discussion has been closed. Hi, i've listed this article for peer review becuase I think it has the potential to become a featured list, and I'm willing to work on any errors and fix up anything that needs fixing to bring it up to featured status. Thanks, Superflewis (talk) 03:29, 16 September 2008 (UTC)

Comments - this can make it to FL but only with some considerable work. Here are my suggestions.
 * References should be placed immediately following punctuation where possible, per WP:CITE.
 * ✅ -- Super flewis (talk) 10:09, 22 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Typos aplenty so run a spell checker over it. E.g. "conjuction", "reeives".
 * ✅ -- Super flewis (talk) 10:09, 22 September 2008 (UTC)


 * What's a CV?
 * ✅ -- Super flewis (talk) 10:09, 22 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Just checking, is "recognizes " Australian English or should it be "recognises"?
 * 'Recognize' is the standard spelling - this is deduced tby the fact that it has over 100 Million hits on google, compared to 'recognises' with 20 million.


 * "prestigious title " this is POV.
 * ✅ -- Super flewis (talk) 10:09, 22 September 2008 (UTC)


 * 5000 ->5,000.
 * ✅ -- Super flewis (talk) 10:18, 22 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Can you explain how you personally feel able to release Image:Jesaulenko1.jpg under CC?
 * I found it in flickr which is general CC 2.0 providing you quote the author. Maybe in this case just to be safe we should relist it as {non-free historic image}?


 * Explain AFL before using the acronym (i.e. put (AFL) after the first use).
 * ✅ -- Super flewis (talk) 10:18, 22 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Same with VFL.
 * ✅ -- Super flewis (talk) 10:18, 22 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Portrait images should use the  parameter per WP:MOS.
 * ✅ -- Super flewis (talk) 10:18, 22 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Why is "AFL Mark of the Year Winners" under the main section heading?
 * ✅ -- Super flewis (talk) 10:18, 22 September 2008 (UTC)


 * "Selection Process" should be "Selection process" per WP:HEAD.
 * ✅ -- Super flewis (talk) 10:18, 22 September 2008 (UTC)


 * That section needs some work - too many really short paragraphs. Merge and improve the flow.
 * ✅ -- Super flewis (talk) 11:28, 22 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Winner short sort by surname - use the sortname template.
 * ✅ -- Super flewis (talk) 11:28, 22 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Note and Video cols do not need to be sortable.
 * [[Image:Symbol question.svg|18px]] How is this done?


 * You need to identify still active players and goal of the year winners with something in addition to colours per WP:MOS - e.g. an asterisk or a dagger.
 * ✅ -- Super flewis (talk) 11:42, 22 September 2008 (UTC)


 * "1 handed screamer " far too POV - plus should be one-handed.
 * ✅ -- Super flewis (talk) 11:42, 22 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Trivia sections are discouraged. Work on adding this information, where pertinent, into the rest of the article.
 * ✅ -- Super flewis (talk) 11:42, 22 September 2008 (UTC)


 * References need  and   and   where missing.
 * [[Image:Symbol question.svg|18px]] How about the youtube links?
 * ✅ -- Flewis (talk) 04:03, 27 September 2008 (UTC)

The Rambling Man (talk) 08:12, 19 September 2008 (UTC)