Wikipedia:Peer review/Matilda House (person)/archive1

Matilda House (person)
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because it is my first attempt at an article and would welcome constructive feedback on style and content.

Thanks, Dnb01 (talk) 00:37, 12 October 2010 (UTC)

Comment: Hi, Dnb01. This certainly looks a worthy subject; however, the peer review process is intended for articles that have already undergone extensive work, and I don't think this draft is as yet at that stage. This article needs some basic structural work, to put it into the appropriate Wikipedia format. I suggest that you first consult WP:DEV which gives excellent information about how articles should be structured. When you've done this I will be happy to look at the article informally, outside the PR process. Meantime it might be best to close this PR. Brianboulton (talk) 23:59, 12 October 2010 (UTC)