Wikipedia:Peer review/Maulana Abul Kalam Azad/archive1

Maulana Abul Kalam Azad
Hi Y'all - let's snatch the bounty and make this great man's biography an FA. All help and advice is welcome. This Fire Burns Always  02:01, 24 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Comments by Dwaipayan
 * 1) Have posted some Citation needed tags, and a few embedded comments in the article. Please address those.
 * 2) The inline citations are from just two web sources. Should be more broadly resourced. I shall be trying the book "India Wins Freedom", if something can be brought from it.
 * 3) Commemoration sounds like original research.
 * 4) When did he die? --Dwaipayan (talk) 07:34, 24 July 2006 (UTC)
 * More comments:
 * Lead: Starts with "..was a poet, writer..". But his primary identity is as a politician, that should be the first thing mentionrd. Also, not much is there in the article to establish Azad as a poet.--Dwaipayan (talk) 11:07, 24 July 2006 (UTC)


 * Publication of 30 pages of India wins freedom were withheld at the time as per Azad's wishes and released 30 years after his death. There were some articles in newspapers about it at the time but I can't remember whether it contained anything interesting or controversial. Please try to check the details just to be sure. Tintin (talk) 11:55, 25 July 2006 (UTC)


 * Can someone please search for pictures of young Azad? I'm doing my best but can't find any. This Fire Burns Always   17:45, 25 July 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 01:46, 26 July 2006 (UTC)