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McBride & the Ride

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 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for November 2008.

This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I feel that it can get to GA class with a bit of work. I started this article a long time ago and have been constantly adding to it. There isn't much to say about their musical stylings that I can find, and I've had a very hard time finding critical reviews outside Allmusic and Entertainment Weekly.

Thanks, Ten Pound Hammer  and his otters • (Broken clamshells • Otter chirps • HELP) 22:17, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

Giggy

 * The infobox lists a lot more members than the lead... odd discrepancy (says when he's only read one paragraph of lead)
 * After reading some more... maybe say it initially consisted of those guys in the first paragraph?
 * "These albums also produced" - why the also?
 * "Brown then introduced"
 * "failed to chart entirely "
 * "produced their first music video" - the song was the producer of the video? :) reword
 * The article basically reads as a discography; album X was released on date, singles X Y and Z were released and charted as follows. Is there nothing more to be said about the band's career? (biography not discography)
 * Overuse of also in the third music career paragraph
 * "In September 2000, Herndon decided to re-unite with McBride and Thomas after meeting them" - after meeting them when/where/why? Sentence ends very awkwardly
 * "Since then, McBride became the bass guitarist in Brooks & Dunn's road band." - don't mix past and present tense in the one sentence
 * In general it feels like there's more content available to be used. Just a gut feeling. Hope this helps... Giggy (talk) 01:17, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Meh, I'm trying. Most of their career was before the Internet as we know it existed, so there aren't a ton of web sources available. All of the members in the infobox are indeed listed in the lead, check the paragraph where it mentions the added members. I haven't found out when or why they reunited, even tho that was much more recently. Ten Pound Hammer  and his otters • (Broken clamshells • Otter chirps • HELP) 01:44, 9 November 2008 (UTC)