Wikipedia:Peer review/McLaren MP4-30/archive1

McLaren MP4-30
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to see it become a Featured Article some day. It has been accepted as a Good Article and has had content included as part of a DYK in June. I am looking for anything that the article needs to make it viable as a Featured Article.

Thanks, Prisonermonkeys (talk) 06:20, 20 August 2016 (UTC)

Images

 * All images will need alt text per WP:ALT
 * The only images that do not have captions are included as multi-images; the captions apply to all images in the group.
 * There was no issue with the captions. The images need alternative text to be added. Tvx1 00:41, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Just a query, why are all the images all placed at right-hand side of the article?
 * That's just the way it has always been done in similar, related articles. I never really had a reason to question it.

Early development

 * The FIA needs to be spelt out with the acronyms in brackets

Power unit — Honda RA615H

 * "Honda introduced several radical concepts to the engine that allowed them to develop a smaller engine that weighed just 145 kg (320 lb)" -


 * reptition of engine
 * Fixed.


 * Remove the acronyms for kinetic entergy recovery system since its only used once in the article

In-season development

 * Do the same for drag reduction system

Asian and American rounds

 * Wikilink safety car for non-racing readers
 * Fixed.
 * "Pits" is slang. Reword to pit lane
 * Working on it.
 * Remove the wikilink for Felipe Massa on the second occassion he is mentioned
 * Fixed.
 * Do the same for Pastor Maldonado
 * Fixed.