Wikipedia:Peer review/Meta-historical fall/archive1

Meta-historical fall


I've listed this article for peer review because this article that I created has two requests for improvement tags at the top placed there by others, and I'm looking for third-party evaluations to see if any such problems remain. These two tags currently in place are: Of course, any other ideas for improvements would be much appreciated as well.
 * This article's tone or style may not reflect the encyclopedic tone used on Wikipedia. (February 2023)
 * This article may lend undue weight to certain ideas, incidents, or controversies. (February 2023)

Thanks for any help! Jjhake (talk) 02:57, 6 March 2023 (UTC)


 * Update: another editor removed the encyclopedic tone cleanup tag, so that the cleanup tag of "undue weight to certain ideas" is the concern remaining in place. Of course, all improvements with a peer review much appreciated. Jjhake (talk) 13:23, 15 March 2023 (UTC)